donationsprites's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wwwblondegirl Music Video]

dude

your supposed warn people for people who can't see many colors you should really make an warning..

[Howdy Ho!]

hmm...

you should really put in a play button because it's still loading and if it's not done it would make other people's connection's lag if they have dail up..should put a pre loader.
( good acting )
(you can get a pre loader in newgrounds)

Elementsk8er506 responds:

i would love to put a preloader, unfortunatly if ya read in my above comment i can't figure out how! it was exported as a .mov and then brought into final cut..then exported once again as a .mov...than, i converted it to a .swf...i try and bring it back into flash but it gets all screwy, any suggestions? and thanks for the acting comment :)

[Flames]

not trying to be mean (maybe I am)

but was there any reason to put this into newgrounds? it looks nice and all but
I don't get it..what's the plot for the fire thing going.
Its very nice, I like the detailed of the flames moving but um..
Any reason why you put this the first place?

W4RGEAR responds:

i was thinking, maybe other artists would like to have these effects in their flash
but i know this doesn't fit as an animation or a game, i just needed to show it somehow.

[RcR : Shaolin Soccer]

wow that was awesome

I loved the sound effects you put on your animation.
The way they moved looks
like they where really kicking a ball that was a good animation.
I hope to see another one with that kind of movement.
(Nice jump kick by the way)....

[Peracfutendin]

umm..

your play button is screwed up..try to fix the error....its working....ok what was that? this flash makes no sence or any effort

[Cheese Sandwich]

cheese sand which?

I see no cheese but egg....title should be egg sand which...and I dont know about this getting a 5...

[Conflict: Man Vs. Nature]

A few things

There should be a play button and the animation should stop when its done.

Kajio responds:

Yeah, I would add those if I knew how :P

Even basic AS is beyond my reach right now. If you know a good tutorial, or can explain it, I'd definitely add those.

[Generic Sprite Flash: 2]

sorry I was takeing a break with flash

that was awesome the only thing you need now is to speed up the flash i put mine at 40 flash rate speed just to make it smooth only

Fro responds:

Thanks. I'll try that next time and see how it works.

[Generic Sprite Flash: 1]

I got an idea on a next flash

1.) maybe you should add some motion tweens you know like zoom to link's face and the old man keeps the people excited into the animation

2.)some sound so that it dose not make it feel dull and boring

3.)jokes some gags and funny stuff would make it more great

4.)maybe some swears

(Its ok I like it).

Fro responds:

Great ideas. Thanks for the helpful review.

[Random Massacre]

eh"

could have been better if it was at a fast frame rate and some motion tween