donationsprites's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Howdy Ho!]

hmm...

you should really put in a play button because it's still loading and if it's not done it would make other people's connection's lag if they have dail up..should put a pre loader.
( good acting )
(you can get a pre loader in newgrounds)

Elementsk8er506 responds:

i would love to put a preloader, unfortunatly if ya read in my above comment i can't figure out how! it was exported as a .mov and then brought into final cut..then exported once again as a .mov...than, i converted it to a .swf...i try and bring it back into flash but it gets all screwy, any suggestions? and thanks for the acting comment :)

[Flames]

not trying to be mean (maybe I am)

but was there any reason to put this into newgrounds? it looks nice and all but
I don't get it..what's the plot for the fire thing going.
Its very nice, I like the detailed of the flames moving but um..
Any reason why you put this the first place?

W4RGEAR responds:

i was thinking, maybe other artists would like to have these effects in their flash
but i know this doesn't fit as an animation or a game, i just needed to show it somehow.

[Conflict: Man Vs. Nature]

A few things

There should be a play button and the animation should stop when its done.

Kajio responds:

Yeah, I would add those if I knew how :P

Even basic AS is beyond my reach right now. If you know a good tutorial, or can explain it, I'd definitely add those.

[Generic Sprite Flash: 2]

sorry I was takeing a break with flash

that was awesome the only thing you need now is to speed up the flash i put mine at 40 flash rate speed just to make it smooth only

Fro responds:

Thanks. I'll try that next time and see how it works.

[Generic Sprite Flash: 1]

I got an idea on a next flash

1.) maybe you should add some motion tweens you know like zoom to link's face and the old man keeps the people excited into the animation

2.)some sound so that it dose not make it feel dull and boring

3.)jokes some gags and funny stuff would make it more great

4.)maybe some swears

(Its ok I like it).

Fro responds:

Great ideas. Thanks for the helpful review.

[The Blob Fight]

here's a good idea

put some effort into your animations because a 15 second animation aint gonna be good

funnyboy0409 responds:

lol JUST TO LET EVERYONE KNOW ....OF COURSE I KNOW ANIMATIONS ARNT SUPPOST TO BE 15SECS LONG DUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IM JUST TRYING IT OUT TO GET TIPS ON THINGS BESIDES A TIME LIMIT OK?

but thank yoou for letting me know .....yea i think your an ass but your an ass with reason...so for that i will try harder ...maybe next time you should have a comment like the guy under you cuz he listed wat i needed to improve on...you tho.....yea ..but ty again k ass guy ....11111111111111